Triggering (Suicide): New poem I wrote - untitled. Shouldn't be too triggering I just wanted to be careful

[Paix et Amour]

Sadness engulfs like a flickering flame

you can’t tell the difference, it’s always been the same

You’re hopelessly lost

inside your own mind

You can’t find you’re way out

it’s as if you’ve gone blind

So you cut your pretty wrist

a new scar to add to many

It’s too bad that one

quickly turns to twenty

You’re drowning in an ocean

depression holding you under

You look at the blood pouring down your wrist

with a sick sense of pride

You start to shake

your eyes go wide

You never got to say

your final goodbye

[Ennui.]

This is beautifully written and I can totally sense the emotions. You did a really amazing job!

[Paix et Amour]

thank you <3