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ThisWillDestroyYou November 23rd 2012 03:05 AM

(a really awkward poem)
 
I may not know...

...
whether it’s meant
to
be
...
whether
the stars are
aligned for you+
me.
...
what tomorrow
may (not)
bring
...
the song you
cause my beating
heart to
sing
...
what each kiss
will
mean
...
if it
means
any
thing
...
why i always
feel stuck
somewhere be - tween
(...
what that means)
a vagabond
with (missing?) everything
...
if you’re
really
mine
and i can’t tell
you
everything
will be
fine

if you have my heart
(i think you do) but
i know
right now
you’re in my arms
and I hope somehow
that’ll do.

~Divergent~ November 23rd 2012 03:30 AM

Re: (a really awkward poem)
 
I really like this! Great poem :)

Ennui. November 23rd 2012 07:18 AM

Re: (a really awkward poem)
 
I like how you wrote this and how you put the periods between each stanza. The way you wrote it made it really interesting. :)


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