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Smile MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 5th 2012, 11:56 AM

MORTAL is just a reminder to those people that seek perfection that perfection doesn't exist. It's okay to be good enough.

MORTAL

I’m not a superhero.
I don’t have lazar eyes.
I don’t have super strength.
I’m not a master of disguise.
I can’t make the earth tremble.
I can’t soar throughout the skies.
I’m no superhuman.
Just a person who really tries.

I can’t become invisible.
I can’t stretch myself.
If we’re miles and miles away
I can’t hear your cry for help.
I don’t have x-ray vision,
I can’t change the weather.
I’m no superhuman.
Just gotta hold me together.

What I am is a person
Who has no riches.
But whose suffered it all
Made it through with bruises and stitches.
A person whose hurt,
Been heartbroken.
The tears that I cry,
Are that memory token.
That remind me that I’m me,
That sometimes its hard to stand.
That I can make mistakes.
I’m not superman.
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Re: MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 5th 2012, 07:04 PM

omygod....this is fantastic it just made my religion class seem not so bad....thank you for such incredible art!!
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Re: MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 5th 2012, 08:35 PM

You'e welcome.Glad yu liked it.
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Re: MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 5th 2012, 09:53 PM

I love this! It's true that nobody is perfect.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 6th 2012, 06:56 AM

I cried whilst reading this, it's that awesome and true


“Go where you are celebrated – not tolerated. If they can’t see the real value of you, it’s time for a new start.”

Dont be afraid to stand for what you believe in, even if that means standing alone..


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Re: MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 8th 2012, 05:03 AM

I absolutely LOVE this! It is amazing! Beautifully written!


"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."

"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free."

Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com

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Re: MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 8th 2012, 05:22 AM

Beautifully constructed, beautifully written, each word, the flow to it, all amazing!

Jay.


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Re: MORTAL (-:Poem By Me :-) - December 8th 2012, 10:23 AM

thanks guys.
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