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WhisperingSilence

December 20th 2012 09:16 PM

the blade.

She feels the anger rise up inside of her,
Something she's felt before,
It feels different, mixed with hatred
And despair,
She knows this feel just won't pass,
It's here to stay ,
Please just make this stop she'll pray,
The answer ?
A blade,
A shiny metal blade,
These wrists were made for slicing,
This live was made for living,
Thoughts come and go
No where to run
No where to hide
Just a blade and a story
One to be told,
No ears to listen,
No hands to hold.
She's alone.

Ennui.

December 20th 2012 09:46 PM

Re: the blade.

I could imagine this well! My favourite two lines were:

Quote:

These wrists were made for slicing,
This live was made for living,

Duet With Myself

December 20th 2012 10:47 PM

Re: the blade.

shivers ran down my spine as I read this: I know this situation all too well... Brilliant job though, the poem was really powerful and... just shivery.

DeletedAccount69

December 22nd 2012 01:41 PM

Re: the blade.

I could relate to this. Thanks for posting. I hope you will share some more of you poems in the future :)

Validity

December 22nd 2012 01:43 PM

Re: the blade.

This was very well done :) I would love to read more of your stuff :)

Jay.

Evanescent

December 23rd 2012 09:17 PM

Re: the blade.

This poem is very strong, and I can relate to it so much.

craz33me

December 23rd 2012 11:52 PM

Re: the blade.

Very powerful. I loved it.

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