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WhisperingSilence December 26th 2012 09:08 PM

She's sick of it
 
It's all gone to shit,
The truth has really hit,
This is it,
It's all sick and twisted,
The world she once new,
Now filled with all this hatred,
Self mutilation
Anger , hurt and pain,
She hates it,
She's feeling shit,
Life's beaten her,
Taking the blade she sees her life flashes before
Tears roll down her cheeks,
She draws one last line across her skin,
Her future it looks so bleak,
She commits the sin.

craz33me December 26th 2012 09:56 PM

Re: She's sick of it
 
I like it. It's really good and powerful.

Thereishope December 27th 2012 10:30 AM

Re: She's sick of it
 
Really well written, thanks for sharing.

Validity December 27th 2012 11:10 AM

Re: She's sick of it
 
Exactly how I feel right now :) It's fantastic!

Jay.

Ennui. December 28th 2012 12:26 AM

Re: She's sick of it
 
I love the emotion and wording you used, great job!

DeletedAccount69 December 28th 2012 05:07 PM

Re: She's sick of it
 
This is a very powerful poem. I am glad that you shared it with us. :)


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