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Any Positive Feedback??? - March 7th 2013, 07:12 PM

The Real Deal

No song can tell how I feel
Only God knows the life Iíve lived
All these boys saying they love me
When itís not me they love itís my personality
So strung out on feelings
Their blinded by reality
Forced to see whatís not real
They cause me to pretend like their immaturity isnít a big deal
But some how, some way, or another it always ends up my fault
Iím always left with a heart thatís lost
Then what?
Whose there for me then?
When the world looks down on me
and God seems like my only friend
My first love who use to comfort me is no longer there?
Why?
His actions didn't show that he cared.
   
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Re: Any Positive Feedback??? - March 7th 2013, 09:17 PM

This is really sad, but well written good job!
   
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Re: Any Positive Feedback??? - March 7th 2013, 11:09 PM

I enjoyed this, it IS sad but amazing

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Re: Any Positive Feedback??? - March 7th 2013, 11:24 PM

This is very good, sometimes God is my only friend too.


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Re: Any Positive Feedback??? - March 8th 2013, 12:34 AM

I totally agree that this is sad but well written! I think you did a good job with this and look forward to seeing you post more.


   
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Re: Any Positive Feedback??? - March 8th 2013, 03:22 AM

Sad but really good.
I like this a lot.
   
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Re: Any Positive Feedback??? - March 8th 2013, 04:43 AM

Is so pretty!! I love it but its sad!!


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