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Exclamation IF... (poem in progress) - March 9th 2013, 06:39 AM

If I gave you the key to my heart
Would you keep it safe?
Or would you just toss it on a shelf
Somewhere where anyone could take it away?

If I told you my deep dark secret
Would you tell me yours?
Or would you just stare at me in disgust
before turning and running the other way?

If I told you that I loved you,
Would you say you love me too?
Or would you just laugh at me and glare,
As you watched my heart slowly break?

If I wore my heart on my sleeve
Would you be careful no to break it?
Or would you be reckless, knock it down
And watch it break into a million pieces as it hit the ground?

If I promised never to leave
Would you promise me the same?
Or would you just toy with my heart,
Treat me like I’m just part of some big game?

If I tried to brighten your grey day,
Would you do the same for me?
Or would you look the other way
When I needed you the most?

If I asked you an important question,
Would you give me an honest answer?
Or would you turn and walk away,
Ignoring the things that I really want to know?

If I told you I wished I'd never been born,
would you really listen?
Or would you just brush me off,
and call me a drama queen?


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Butterfly, don't fly away on me yet



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Re: IF... (poem in progress) - March 9th 2013, 04:04 PM

I like this and how there were questions in every stanza. It made it a really interesting read.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: IF... (poem in progress) - March 9th 2013, 05:28 PM

I agree with Dez, the questions made it really interesting to read!
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Re: IF... (poem in progress) - March 10th 2013, 10:39 AM

Interesting and very nice. You did this well.
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Re: IF... (poem in progress) - March 10th 2013, 12:57 PM

This one is still a work in progress. I may add to, or alter it from time to time.


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