Yet another nameless poem...

[Rhyfelwr]

Well, was bored on the train to Vienna. I've got free inet here in the hotel, so I decided to upload the 'poem' that came into my mind yesterday.

Again, if any names pop into your head, please tell me, as I've got them saved as 'Nameless poem'!

Enjoy!

her_bright_skies


"Darkness.
Motion.
Screeching tires.
Deafening crash.

Pain.
Shouts.
Bloody drops.
Ruby red.

Confusion.
Melancholy.
Penetrating metal.
Sickening rips.

Sirens.
Screams.
Flowing blood.
Running footsteps.

Desertion.
Abandonment.
No hope.
Fading light.

Query.
Why?
Why me?
Dying flame.

Light.
Rescue.
Kind Savior.
Another chance."

[Ennui.]

I love this a lot! There is a lot of vivid description and detail in this which makes it really great.
Maybe you can name it Savior?

[Rhyfelwr]

Originally Posted by Cataclysmic

I love this a lot! There is a lot of vivid description and detail in this which makes it really great.
Maybe you can name it Savior?

Haha My own suggestion by another poem coming back to me! Thanks though, great idea!

[oldaccount]

This is really good! I like the name Savior too

[Le Papillon]

:O thats awesome.
Its short in words, but that acctually helps with the discription and imagery.
I like it c: <3

This is very powerful! It's good. I like Dez's idea of the name "Savior".