Storm Wars (parallel poem)

[Temperance]

a dark cloud descends

a nightmare invades

upon the silent valley

as the battle rages

thunder rolls overhead

a loud boom is heard

lightning glows brilliantly

a bright light fills the sky

the skies open up

dark grey clouds loom overhead

the rain pours down

as soldiers trudge through mud

everything gets drenched

and equipment grows heavy

the storm blows out of control

lives are lost as fighting continues

the rain subsides

the fighting comes to a standstill

as the clouds roll out

the sky overhead brightens

the sun shines through

the battle is over

[Ennui.]

This is really awesome and creative! I like it!

Creative indeed. I liked this one. c:

[Temperance]

Thanks guys, Im thinking you understand that they ARE 2 separate poems?
one about a thunderstorm and one about war. but they also work together as one...

Yep, I got it. I like things like this.

[Temperance]

Just checking I like parallel poems. But they're so hard to write, and not a lot of people understand how to read them.