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Post Third Person - April 29th 2013, 04:16 PM

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She has a disease that is not usually apparent
And when it is visible to others, they care not
Foolish beings only care for themselves
It is to survive; caring will only bring one down

But she still cares for others despite their lack of recognition

Of her own grievous problems; she is already so far into the abyss
And her feeble attempts at helping others sink her lower

She doesn’t care though; because they matter more than she

The poor girl copes with harsher cigarettes
And burning her skin with their ashes

Yet she still cries throughout the day and night
Though they (her “friends”) still do not notice

The only one that listens is her little furred companion
Even though her cat does not comment on anything
And probably only stays for adoration and nourishment

Which is understandable; survival comes into play once again

Her mother is in the hospital, sick and in need of attention
And her sister goes out all day and night to avoid confrontation with
Her father because he screams and demeans the young girl for nothing

That girl cannot take this on top of everything else; it hurts

To add, her lover lives a ways away
They used to spend most of their time talking (or at least texting)
But now he has work and is unable to devote his loving time

So she is just alone in near blackness

If that wasn’t enough, there is more
The souls roaming her mind attack her with verbal insults as well
And she fears when they take over her body
To wreak havoc on those she loves (though they do not seem to love her)

Her psychiatrist never bothers listening to even a word
Continuously giving her the same dose of medication that no longer helps
They did not help much in the first place, but at least it did a little, no?
And her counselor is nice but still is forgetful to do things that would help

It doesn’t help that people at school attack her for everything as well
Making fun both behind her back and right in front of her face
Not to mention some of her teachers do the same (though less obviously)
So she has nowhere to run for escape; there is no “safe house”

The piteous girl is stuck in her hellish world in secrecy
Fearful of many things; particularly being locked in a psyche ward
As is often suggested without even mentioning the majority of her pathetic existence
So she keeps bottling everything inside until she explodes (frequently) throughout the day
   
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Re: Third Person - April 29th 2013, 08:34 PM

And she fears when they take over her body
To wreak havoc on those she loves (though they do not seem to love her)
Her psychiatrist never bothers listening to even a word
Continuously giving her the same dose of medication that no longer helps
......wow!
You're a fantastic writer (by the way, welcome to TH, I'm Tay, yada yada yada )
Keep writing, I can't wait to read more
   
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Re: Third Person - April 30th 2013, 12:40 AM

You are an amazing writer! This was great!


   
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Re: Third Person - April 30th 2013, 05:29 AM

This is simply amazing. <3
   
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