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WhisperingSilence December 30th 2013 08:29 PM

Emotions
 
Anger explodes like the waves crash against the sea wall,
She's standing tall but she's about to fall,
Falling, falling, fallen,
She's trying to stand up tall,
But the sea's frozen,
She's feeling small,
Fears taken over,
Like an angry wave crashing against the sea wall,
Emotions have taken over,
She can only hope for a four leaved clover,
She's trying to stand tall ,
She feels so small,
The waves crash against the sea wall angry waves,
She's the wall, the waves are her emotions.

Azure. December 30th 2013 08:35 PM

Re: Emotions
 
I really love how you wrote this. It's so powerful and the words flow so well D:. Love it.

Ennui. December 30th 2013 08:36 PM

Re: Emotions
 
I like this, especially the simile of the waves crashing against the sea wall. :)

WhisperingSilence December 31st 2013 08:32 AM

Re: Emotions
 
Thanks - I came up with this poem there and then on the spot and just kinda like typed it out.


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