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WhisperingSilence

January 4th 2014 03:59 PM

Volcano

I'm a volcano waiting to erupt,
The hot molten lava is bubbling over,
Don't get to close, I'm not sure when I'll blow,
I think you better stand back and just go,
One, Two, Three, Four,
The molten lava is heating up more and more,
I'm a volcano waiting to erupt,
Hot lava over flows,
I explode,
This volcano was ready to erupt,
Till next time this volcano remains dormant..
Till the next eruption..

Azure.

January 4th 2014 04:18 PM

Re: Volcano

I love the metaphor you used in this!

NotExactlyCrazy

January 4th 2014 08:11 PM

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EXCELLENT!!!

Ennui.

January 4th 2014 11:14 PM

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I really love how you used a volcano as a metaphor to describe your feelings! :D This is awesome.

better-than-ecstasy

January 5th 2014 01:23 AM

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This is brilliant! Very creative! I honestly love this piece! Great job! :D

Pirouette

January 5th 2014 03:11 AM

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I love the metaphor too, very nice job!! :D

DeletedAccount69

January 8th 2014 01:49 AM

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I enjoyed the metaphor as well. Thank you for sharing.

crisscrossapplesauce

January 8th 2014 02:02 AM

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This is really really good Lyd! The volcano comparison is PERFECT! Keep up the good work!

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