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Waves of the Moon - October 28th 2014, 03:09 AM

My emotions are revealed like the waves of the moon.
They rotate in cycles and change all too soon.
One minute I'm smiles,
The next minute denials
Or I'm creating a vicious monsoon.

Like the crescent moon I'm not really there,
Hiding in the darkness of the cool night air.
I'm coy and I'm shy
And I'm waiting to die.
It's a pain I cannot even bear.

Sometimes, though, I shine awfully bright.
I'm big and I'm round and I'm so full of light.
Good thoughts and cheer
For a day or a year,
I am the full moon that shines in the night.

However there's a time when I can't even be seen.
I'm hidden in darkness alone and unclean.
No light to be found,
No goodness around.
I'm cold and I'm bitter and mean.

Much like the moon I change like the tide.
My emotions and phases make a wild ride.
I pull people in
And I either loose or I win,
My influence over them giving me pride.

My emotions are revealed like the waves of the moon.
They rotate in cycles and change all too soon.
One minute I'm smiles,
The next minute denials
Or I'm creating a vicious monsoon.


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Re: Waves of the Moon - October 28th 2014, 03:20 AM

I really like this!

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Re: Waves of the Moon - October 28th 2014, 06:41 AM

This is really creative. You did a good job on this!
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Re: Waves of the Moon - October 30th 2014, 09:18 AM

I loved this! The imagery was great and the whole idea behind it was something I could really connect with. I especially liked the way you repeated the first stanza, it really tied it all together. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Waves of the Moon - November 2nd 2014, 02:55 AM

Good imagery, good emotion, very nicely done. I really liked this one!

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Re: Waves of the Moon - November 2nd 2014, 03:00 AM

I love how you wrote this! It's awesome!

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