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WhisperingSilence

December 1st 2014 10:23 PM

I talk.

I breathe,
I talk,
I long to be free,
I walk,
I smile longing for acceptance,
I hope
I pray to be noticed,
You walk past me,
Do you see me or notice me ?
I talk, I breathe, I smile, I hope, I walk...
I talk in a silent way..
It's not the words I say..
Look at me see me..
Maybe then you'll see the secret I'm trying to give away

Azure.

December 2nd 2014 02:13 AM

Re: I talk.

I really like this! You illustrate the moment and feeling very well.

Ennui.

December 2nd 2014 03:51 AM

Re: I talk.

I like the style!

Kintsukuroi.

December 4th 2014 12:06 AM

Re: I talk.

I like how you wrote this. :)

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