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Part two. - January 18th 2015, 03:44 AM

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This is part two of Intoxicated Dream. It can be triggering in some parts so please be careful.

If you didn't let go of my throat I could have died.
Never in a million years would you swallow your pride,
because you're a saint who can't ever do any wrong.
And compared to a child you're really big and strong.
So I did all of the swallowing for you instead, my dear,
up until I was vomiting and green from ear to ear.
I was forced to go along with the threat of my death,
your hands around my neck to suck out my breath.
I didn't want you to kill me; I was too young to die,
so I breathed it all in and I embraced each lie.
You never actually loved me in the way you once said,
because love is not forcing things on a child in bed.
Each night I shake with anticipation of your arrival,
and getting through it all means gambling with survival.
You would hurt me every single time I tried to flee,
I still sometimes wonder if I'll ever truly break free.

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They whispered to her
you cannot withstand the storm
she whispered back
i am the storm.
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Re: Part two. - January 18th 2015, 04:27 AM

This is stunning!

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Re: Part two. - January 18th 2015, 06:26 PM

This is really good!

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Re: Part two. - January 18th 2015, 07:06 PM

You wrote it well, with imagery and describing the experience.
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Re: Part two. - January 19th 2015, 03:15 AM

What. How. Why.
Stop being so perfect.

throw yourself into the unknown
with pace & a fury defiant.

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Re: Part two. - January 19th 2015, 03:44 AM

This is amazing Cassie <3 You're poems never fail to amaze me! I love this one, it's very emotional. <3


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Re: Part two. - January 19th 2015, 05:28 AM

This is amazing as always.
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Re: Part two. - January 20th 2015, 05:33 AM

This is amazing.

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