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Avox. February 7th 2015 01:28 PM

Dystopian Children
We are the people that you created.
A generation going nowhere.
We are the kids that you hate.
Brought up by fear and paranoia.
The technology era,
distinguished by guns and violence.
Raised and spoiled;
aggression and hate the new emotions.
Alienated from each other.
Passion and empathy completely diminished.
A dystopian world,
ruled by liars and thieves.
Pain is coupled with pleasure.
Angst and depression consuming the minds.
Break away from the hate.
Become a better generation.
We are not the nowhere kids.

Not_here February 7th 2015 06:35 PM

Re: Dystopian Children
Love the last line and how you changed it to a hopeful message in the end

Horsefeathers. February 7th 2015 11:06 PM

Re: Dystopian Children
Is it just me or does this sound like it could be a Green Day song? XD Seriously though, I really liked this, especially how you turned it around at the end!

Lexify. February 8th 2015 05:26 PM

Re: Dystopian Children
I like this a lot! D:

Spoons February 8th 2015 11:41 PM

Re: Dystopian Children
I am loving this!

.:PrincessZelda:. February 9th 2015 10:45 PM

Re: Dystopian Children
This is really good! :)

Azure. February 10th 2015 03:45 AM

Re: Dystopian Children
This is awesome! :)

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