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I wrote this a long time ago... - February 15th 2015, 08:23 AM

I wrote this poem when I was about 16, it's a bit rough but I just found it and felt like sharing...

There sits a child crying, she asks her mother why the wold is so unfair.
Her mother doesn't know what to say, so she simply just sits with a blank stare.
This child sits up the whole night crying, wondering why she had to witness her daddy dying.
Her whole world fell before her eyes, a downtown shooting led to his demise.
There is no reason to when or why, all she can do is cry to get by.
The murderers didn't care what they were doing, when they saw him they just started shooting.
So in the end there were two victims in the street, the man dying and his daughter by his feet.

There sits a man with a cup, he's begging for people to spare him a buck.
He has no home, nor no place to go. And in this world he is all alone.
He is ashamed of the way he gets by, but he knows he absolutely has to try.
He lost his job because of a fight, that's when he learned two wrongs don't make a right.
A month went by and no job he can find, that's when his wife and kids left him far behind.
No job means no money, no money means no life. So now he sits by the curb showing he has nothing left to sacrifice.
He's left to wonder why this world is so unfair, and why there isn't anyone left in this world decent enough to care.

There lays a girl on her bed at night, she writes poetry until she starts to feel alright.
Her dad works and her mom is no longer home, so for the most part she is all alone.
On the outside she looks calm and okay, but on the inside she is broken and in so much pain.
Her heart was broken by the only person she ever trusted, and on the inside, she and her trust are completely busted.
She lets her feelings out through a pen, hoping this will keep her from the bitter end.
After she's done, for just a short while, maybe she can plaster on her familiar fake smile.
You take her for granted, like she's here to stay, but how do you know today isn't her last day?
She could go home and wonder why the world is so unfair, and she could end her like just right there.
How can you live knowing you could have saved her? But you were too ignorant to become her much needed savior.

I haven't written in years but I'm going to start trying again. Wish me luck, please!
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Re: I wrote this a long time ago... - February 15th 2015, 09:58 PM

I really like this and hope to see you write more!

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Re: I wrote this a long time ago... - February 16th 2015, 07:58 PM

This was really good! I too hope that you write more!

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Re: I wrote this a long time ago... - February 16th 2015, 11:25 PM

This is really good!

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Re: I wrote this a long time ago... - February 17th 2015, 03:17 AM

I liked this and would love to read more of your works!
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