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JollyRancher. February 24th 2015 04:14 AM

Poem #1
 
Fear,
Alone,
Tears,
Hopeless,
Gone,

Light,
Friendship,
Hope,
Love,
Together

I fear being alone,
The tears just run down my cheek,
The hopeless feeling wishing it was gone,

But there is light in friendship,
that gives me hope,
and the love of those friends,
Is what keeps me together.

Thereishope February 24th 2015 06:32 AM

Re: Poem #1
 
This is really good! Thanks for sharing! :)

Chai. February 24th 2015 03:10 PM

Re: Poem #1
 
This is good! Thank you for sharing it!

.:PrincessZelda:. February 24th 2015 11:44 PM

Re: Poem #1
 
This is really good! :)

Kintsukuroi. February 26th 2015 01:14 AM

Re: Poem #1
 
This is short but it is also written nicely. Thank you for sharing this. :)

Ennui. February 26th 2015 03:26 AM

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Short but really good!

hocus pocus February 28th 2015 10:30 PM

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I like how you wrote this!


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