TeenHelp
Support Forums Today's Posts Chat Room

Get Advice Connect with TeenHelp Resources
HelpLINK Facebook     Twitter     Tumblr     Instagram    Hotlines    Safety Zone    Alternatives


You are not registered or have not logged in

Hello guest! (Not a guest? Log in above!)

As a guest on TeenHelp you are only able to use some of our site's features. By registering an account you will be able to enjoy unlimited access to our site, and will be able to:

  • Connect with thousands of teenagers worldwide by actively taking part in our Support Forums and Chat Room.
  • Find others with similar interests in our Social Groups.
  • Express yourself through our Blogs, Picture Albums and User Profiles.
  • And much much more!

Signing up is free, anonymous and will only take a few moments, so click here to register now!


Self Expression Poems, stories, artwork and similar creations are great ways to let out your thoughts or feelings. Please share your work with us here!

Closed Thread
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread
  (#1 (permalink)) Old
Avox. Offline
Not In Use
Junior TeenHelper
****
 
Avox.'s Avatar
 
Name: Emily
Gender: Female
Location: .

Posts: 320
Blog Entries: 4
Join Date: October 7th 2014

March 8th 2015, 11:59 AM

This thread has been labeled as triggering, particularly on the subject of eating disorders, by the original poster or by a Moderator. The contents of this thread might therefore not be suitable for certain sensitive users. Please take this into consideration before continuing to read.

A shallow man
will only date a model,
but at least he's
honest.

A jerk
will date anyone,
but only make the models feel
beautiful.

A decent guy
will date an average girl,
say he doesn't look at size,
but his actions say otherwise.

A nice guy
will date a fat girl,
but marry
a skinny one.

A good guy
will marry a fat girl,
but wish,
every day,
that she was thinner--
and she
will always know.

A rare guy
will date a fat girl
and not realize
that she's fat.
She will feel
beautiful
and think
she's a model.

But he's a
minority,
and non-model girls are a
majority.

There's a solution:
Starve
until the fat
disappears.
Until every guy
that has ever preferred a skinny girl
over you;
over a girl that looks like you
-- or worse --
is even smaller than you,
but not small
enough,
would finally
consider you
worthy.
Starve.

But don't get too thin.
Guys complain about that too.
Now you're not pretty enough,
again.

Starve until you're
just right --
they'll tell you how great you look;
ask how you did it.

You'll lie,
yet again,
to maintain
the facade.

They'll think
you're disciplined --
but they don't know
just how much.

You can starve so they're happy;
put on a smile
to make them think you are too. Because you never will be --

they've destroyed your mind
with their standards;
you've destroyed it
with striving to live up to them.

You'll marry a guy
who tells you
you're beautiful,
but your eyes are broken;
an ugly,
obese girl
relentlessly
stares back.

She tells you
your husband
lies.

She tells you
food is bad,
purging is good.

She tells you
he prefers someone skinnier,
someone better.

You'll never be enough --
all because some
teenage boy
hung up a poster of a
photoshopped
model on his wall --
decided that she
is the ultimate goal,

and, thus,
your destiny emerged.


If this is triggering, please do remove it


Survivors have Scars. Victims have Graves.

Last edited by Horsefeathers.; March 10th 2015 at 02:40 AM. Reason: Merging posts.
   
  (#2 (permalink)) Old
Not_here Offline
Member
I can't get enough
*********
 
Not_here's Avatar
 
Name: nobody
Gender: Other

Posts: 2,535
Blog Entries: 571
Join Date: October 24th 2011

Re: A Modern Epidemic - March 9th 2015, 08:09 PM

I think putting a triggering prefix should be okay. Don't worry<3 I liked it and it speaks a lot to how people think these days.
   
  (#3 (permalink)) Old
Horsefeathers. Offline
Walk through the fire.

TeenHelp Addict
************
 
Horsefeathers.'s Avatar
 
Name: Charlie
Gender: Absent
Location: Elsewhere

Posts: 9,331
Blog Entries: 83
Join Date: September 20th 2009

Re: A Modern Epidemic - March 10th 2015, 02:41 AM

With the triggering prefix I think it's fine to stay. This was very powerful, and there was a lot of emotion behind it. Your style, as usual, is amazing, and the message behind the poem was expressed very clearly and pointedly. Great work, as always!


throw yourself into the unknown
with pace & a fury defiant.

   
  (#4 (permalink)) Old
Wheek! Offline
Eat, sleep, repeat!

TeenHelp Veteran
*************
 
Wheek!'s Avatar
 
Name: Dez
Age: 24
Gender: \_(ツ)_/
Location: Connecticut, USA

Posts: 20,024
Blog Entries: 140
Join Date: November 16th 2010

Re: A Modern Epidemic - March 10th 2015, 11:03 PM

I like how you did stanzas with the various types of guys!


   
  (#5 (permalink)) Old
Member
Outside, huh?
**********
 
.:PrincessZelda:.'s Avatar
 
Name: Cathy
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: USA

Posts: 4,420
Blog Entries: 398
Join Date: January 16th 2012

Re: A Modern Epidemic - March 12th 2015, 11:06 PM

This is really good!




Member Since 1/15/2012
   
  (#6 (permalink)) Old
Lexify. Offline
Member
Outside, huh?
**********
 
Lexify.'s Avatar
 
Name: Lexi.
Gender: Female

Posts: 4,100
Blog Entries: 1
Join Date: March 3rd 2014

Re: A Modern Epidemic - March 13th 2015, 03:24 AM

This:
Quote:
they've destroyed your mind
with their standards;
you've destroyed it
with striving to live up to them.
   
Closed Thread

Bookmarks

Tags
epidemic, modern

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off




All material copyright 1998-2021, TeenHelp.
Terms | Legal | Privacy | Conduct | Complaints | Mobile

Powered by vBulletin®.
Copyright ©2000-2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search engine optimization by vBSEO.
Theme developed in association with vBStyles.