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Heartbeat - April 5th 2015, 01:49 PM

Listen,
It beats,
Steady,
Controlled,
But,
Irregular,
It goes.

Listen,
My heart,
Changes,
Pattern,
Stopped,
Fainter; softer,
It slows.

Listen,
It beats,
Even,
Controlled,
Yet,
Irregular,
It knows.

Listen,
My heart,
Changes,
Pattern,
Stopped,
My world; my life,
It slows.

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Re: Heartbeat - April 5th 2015, 06:20 PM

I like the repetition in it!


   
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Re: Heartbeat - April 5th 2015, 06:25 PM

I really like the ending!
   
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Re: Heartbeat - April 6th 2015, 12:43 AM

I like the repetition and the ending is cool, too.


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