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Doormat - April 9th 2015, 12:06 PM

Here I am
Your doormat
Step on me
And wipe your feet.

Walk all over me
Like you always do
I can take it
I always have before.

Use me to clean up
Then be on your way
Ignored and neglected
Just like before.

I'll be your doormat anytime
And I think you know that.
Each time I think it'll be different
But I should know better.

You always leave me
Beaten and broken
I'll mend myself
I'm more than capable.

The scars are buried
Deep inside
No one will see them
Because I buff them away.

One day
I'll find the perfect one
Who sees the scars
But isn't scared.

He'll see right through me
Understand how I feel
He'll love me for me
And not change me.

When that day comes
You'll be sorry
That you can't come back
To wipe your feet again.


Survivors have Scars. Victims have Graves.
   
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Re: Doormat - April 9th 2015, 12:15 PM

This is amazing and I really liked this part:
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Here I am
You always leave me
Beaten and broken
I'll mend myself
I'm more than capable.

The scars are buried
Deep inside
No one will see them
Because I buff them away.

   
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Re: Doormat - April 9th 2015, 12:18 PM

Thank you


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Re: Doormat - April 9th 2015, 12:37 PM

I love it


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Re: Doormat - April 10th 2015, 12:43 AM

I agree with Lexi's favorite part, it's mine too!


   
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Re: Doormat - April 10th 2015, 06:56 AM

I like how the poem gets more optimistic.
   
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Re: Doormat - April 11th 2015, 04:49 AM

This is powerful, I like it!


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