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Save Me - May 9th 2015, 07:27 PM

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Just one more, swallow once more
Asleep, say goodbye to restless nights
But now you canít wake up
Oh, whatís happening?

Inhale, breathe the bitterness
Red turning blue, itís becoming harder
Eyes roll back, gently you fall
Wait, thereís no one to catch you.

Slide it gently across the surface
Stinging, the warmth seeping through
Unveiling the fear, the pain you still feel
But you canít stop all that youíve begun.

Slip your head through
Each thread prickly against your neck
Let your feet fall from under you
Shaking, weak, the knot you canít undo.

Feet tremble as your toes hang off the edge
Standing still, close your eyes
As the tears begin to fall, you spread your arms
Fallen full force, broken wings and all.

Too loud, these voices you canít stand
Finger on the trigger, frustrated
Lingering disappointment and no exits
Pulled it without realizing it was pointed at yourself.


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Re: Save Me - May 9th 2015, 09:30 PM

This is very creative and scary. Are you ok? If you need to talk to someone you can pm/VM me
   
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Re: Save Me - May 9th 2015, 11:14 PM

This is stunning!


   
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Re: Save Me - May 10th 2015, 08:47 AM

Thank you


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Re: Save Me - May 11th 2015, 04:26 AM

This is great! I love the alliteration in the fifth line.


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They whispered to her
you cannot withstand the storm
she whispered back
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Re: Save Me - May 11th 2015, 08:41 AM

This is amazing
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Re: Save Me - May 14th 2015, 05:04 AM

This is really well written and super emotional.
Stay strong. <3
   
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