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The thoughts of a mad man - June 17th 2015, 06:41 AM

the trap is tempting
Loving and waiting
This heart so empty
It trips and falls
This little trap consumes us all.
The dark is growing
And I'm slowly showing
The cracks my heart is making

Oh the trap is tempting
Loving and waiting
This heart so empty
Trips and falls
This little trap consumes us all

Maybe I'm crazy
Fat and lazy
But I see right through
What you plan to do
Oh
The mouse is shaking
Cracking and breaking
Broken hearts and empty faces

The trap is tempting
Loving and waiting
This heart so empty and black
Trips and falls
This little trap consumes us all


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Re: The thoughts of a mad man - June 17th 2015, 08:11 AM

I like how you wrote this.


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Re: The thoughts of a mad man - June 18th 2015, 01:34 AM

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I like how you wrote this.

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Re: The thoughts of a mad man - June 20th 2015, 07:32 PM

I'm glad you posted again!


   
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Re: The thoughts of a mad man - June 20th 2015, 10:52 PM

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I'm glad you posted again!


This was before the other post lol but thank you


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Re: The thoughts of a mad man - June 21st 2015, 01:14 PM

I really enjoyed it. Very well written. Keep writing.


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Re: The thoughts of a mad man - June 21st 2015, 06:07 PM

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