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Not_here

August 26th 2015 12:48 AM

august 22 poem

Youre well hidden here
Hot soapy tears leak
Tears that engrave into your skin
Like a footprint in fresh cement

Ennui.

August 26th 2015 12:52 AM

Re: august 22 poem

Short but really well written. I liked it!

Chai.

August 26th 2015 01:06 AM

Re: august 22 poem

This is really well written!

Kintsukuroi.

August 27th 2015 08:06 AM

Re: august 22 poem

I liked this but I loved the last two lines. D:

Not_here

August 28th 2015 01:40 AM

Re: august 22 poem

Thank you all of you <3

Everglow.

August 28th 2015 08:00 PM

Re: august 22 poem

Something about this kind of gave me chills. This is awesome! Definitely keep writing.

Not_here

August 28th 2015 11:40 PM

Re: august 22 poem

Thank you Hollie
For some reason I just reread it and realized the first line is missing. I'm not sure if it will change your idea of the poem but the first line should have been "wild snore stalks surround you" with the rest following.

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