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DeletedAccount2 December 3rd 2015 12:41 PM

Another poem I wrote
 
Choices
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I walked down to the forest
Where I found myself alone
So if I'm tempted into badness
Then no one would ever know

But if I stay strong
And do what I know is right
Then Ill sing a happy song
That makes me shine so bright

I don't want to be pulled into guilt
Or be far too ashamed
By some big mistake
Now I have two choices

I walked down to the forest
Where I found myself alone
Instead of falling in badness
I just said no
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I know that some of you wanted to see more of my poems so here's another one. I was referring to suicide in the poem but it makes it more relatable to not mention that. I mean, there are a lot of people who act differently when they're alone.
I literally wrote this poem when I was in the woods, almost ready to kill myself. But I didn't even try! :)

MsNobleEleanor December 3rd 2015 12:57 PM

Re: Another poem I wrote
 
I really like this and how you talked about the forest. It's creative and I am glad you kept yourself safe. Was the walk in the forest, did you find it to be relaxing and therapeutic being outside?

DeletedAccount2 December 3rd 2015 02:33 PM

Re: Another poem I wrote
 
Atropos, yes it was relaxing and therapeutic. I just have to make sure not to do something stupid when I'm alone.

DeletedAccount11 December 4th 2015 09:33 PM

Re: Another poem I wrote
 
Yet another well-written poem! I'm glad you didn't do anything dangerous when you took a walk. Stay safe, okay? You can get through these thoughts. :hug:

Ennui. December 5th 2015 01:05 AM

Re: Another poem I wrote
 
I know you can do this! :hug: This is a great poem.

hocus pocus December 7th 2015 04:47 AM

Re: Another poem I wrote
 
I like this poem, you did a nice job on it. I'm glad you used it as an alternative instead of harming yourself. :hug:

Kintsukuroi. December 10th 2015 05:30 AM

Re: Another poem I wrote
 
I liked the poem and I'm glad that you were able to keep yourself safe. Hang in there. :hug:


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