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WhisperingSilence

December 5th 2015 01:35 PM

Smile

My life was going down the sink
I could only see a future that was so dark and bleak
I wasn't where I wanted to be
I'd lost sight of the real me
I opened a door
A smile and friendly faces galore
Friends even more
They held me hand
Showed me the way
Put the blade down kiddo it ain't gotta be the same each day
Don't you know your worth so much more
Smile and laugh we will help you through
Put those feet back on the floor
Your life and future is worth so much more
Come in from the cold theres a way out
Just open the door and give us a shout!

Notsure

December 5th 2015 01:49 PM

Re: Smile

Its great. :) I like it.

MsNobleEleanor

December 6th 2015 11:13 AM

Re: Smile

I really liked this. I liked how you added in the support from friends helping in your poem.

DeletedAccount11

December 6th 2015 09:45 PM

Re: Smile

I really like how this talks about support from friends. I am glad you have friends to support you. Hang in there.

WhisperingSilence

December 6th 2015 09:52 PM

Re: Smile

Its interesting how everyones seeing it as it's about friends - it sort of its. but its also about my local YMCA which through going to i have made lots of great friends - i sort of do see some of the staff at the ymca i go to as friends.

Ennui.

December 7th 2015 01:07 AM

Re: Smile

Even about the YMCA, it is still really great! :D

hocus pocus

December 9th 2015 04:33 AM

Re: Smile

I like how positive this is! :hug:

Kintsukuroi.

December 10th 2015 05:23 AM

Re: Smile

I'm glad that you have such support from the YMCA and this is nicely done.
Hang in there. :)

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