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Not_here May 10th 2016 08:34 PM

poem
 
I confided in him
I told it to him
The things that scared me most
We laughed
We talked
We shared
We fought
Then I walked, away
He shouted, after me
I wanted out
For him to let me be
He agreed
Next thing I know
He's sent the things that scared me most
to chase me
to haunt me
to torture my soul
each day increasingly more

Ennui. May 10th 2016 08:38 PM

Re: poem
 
I really like how this ended.
I hope you are okay.

hocus pocus May 11th 2016 11:18 PM

Re: poem
 
I like this. I like how the lines are short and it kind of makes you read it quickly.

DeletedAccount69 May 12th 2016 03:07 AM

Re: poem
 
There are some things about this that I can relate too. I thought it flowed quite well. I hope you are doing okay.

Kintsukuroi. May 17th 2016 06:03 AM

Re: poem
 
Thank you for sharing this. I hope things are alright <3


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