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A Love Poem
I wrote this for the love of my life, Hailey. I think this may help me prove my love to her.
The girl with the pretty brown eyes, She loves her some fries. She has long brown hair. I think I see her everywhere. Even if people stare, From here to there, I'll follow you anywhere. I love you. So? Honest feedback! Update: I changed the poem a bit! The girl with the pretty brown eyes, we'll still be talking when we die. She has long brown hair, I think I see her everywhere. Even if people stare, From here to there, I'll follow you anywhere. I love you. Better? |
Re: A Love Poem
I would kind of think of this in a more friendshippy way if I got this, especially if I didn't already know if you were LGBT+. It is a really cute poem, don't get me wrong, but the line "She loves her some fries" just makes it more seeming like a silly, friend type poem in a way.
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Yeah, it kinda does. I just couldn't think of anything lese that rhymes with fries. lol
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I think this is really sweet.
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I did think this was really cute but I also agree with Dez. If people didn't know things about you they would be more likely to think that this was meant in a friendly way.
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Thanks guys!
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What a sweet way to express your love for her.
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Thanks, Maizel. :)
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