Re: [Poem] The Final Moments -
May 19th 2009, 04:49 PM
Originally Posted by Desolate
My life is all that remains, and I promise that
I can't take this.
I ponder on past and what could have been before
I have no motion...
I just wanted to say I think this is a really great poem, and it's good that you find it an alternative to SH. These are my favourite bits - although the imagery of the snakes is a really interesting idea too - I like the ambiguity in these lines.