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WhisperingSilence

September 2nd 2016 07:42 PM

memories.

i've got scars,
i've got memories,
running across my skin,
reminding me of the person i used to be,
i've got scars,
i've got memories,
reminding me of the way things could have been,
i've got secrets,
i've got scars,
i've got memories,
running across my skin,
reminding me of the past,
i've scars, secrets and memories,
marks of madness running along my skin,
help me please.

TheAtomicBlade

September 3rd 2016 12:26 PM

Re: memories.

This is really beautiful mate.

hocus pocus

September 3rd 2016 09:47 PM

Re: memories.

I agree, this is pretty. I can relate, especially to the line about memories running across your skin. It actually reminds me of having a physical urge to self-harm or a flashback of some sort that feels like there's something crawling across or under your skin.

Elision

September 3rd 2016 10:30 PM

Re: memories.

The repetition works so we'll in this poem, it is really good. Thank you for sharing :)

Everglow.

September 3rd 2016 10:45 PM

Re: memories.

I like the pattern made by the repetition, it gets the message across in a really fluent and creative way and gives it some flow. It's a really good piece of writing.

Ennui.

September 5th 2016 10:32 PM

Re: memories.

Beautifully written! <3

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