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NeuroBeautiful

December 3rd 2016 03:28 PM

best friend

You're a great friend to me,
A super awesome lovely creature
I said it aloud, I said it proud
And now the jinx ninjas are lurking about
Their eyes are glaring in the dark,
Their teeth are ready to gnash,
their claws ready to mark
Now I'm nervous
Now I'm quiet
Now my fingers crossed

DeletedAccount69

December 3rd 2016 07:24 PM

Re: best friend

I really liked this.

hocus pocus

December 4th 2016 01:21 AM

Re: best friend

I really like this too! I especially like how the third line sounds and I can relate to being afraid to jinx things. Hope writing this helped you. :hug:

Ennui.

December 4th 2016 11:52 PM

Re: best friend

I like this as well!

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