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NeuroBeautiful

December 15th 2016 03:37 AM

poem

Such a tender heart,
purring, loving,
I can't imagine my life, without
his presence.
He showed me a new dimension of joy

He feels so soft,
warm like a mug of tea
But his poor paws, are frigid cold.
So are his ears and his runny nose

I hear him yelp in pain
In the language he knows best
Sometimes the most giving are hurting so much
Sometimes the most heart warming, need a warm touch

Ennui.

December 15th 2016 11:52 AM

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I really like this one! It kind of made me feel warm.

Storyteller.

December 15th 2016 11:00 PM

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Aw, this was somehow both really sweet and kind of sad. Thanks for sharing. D:

hocus pocus

December 16th 2016 12:58 PM

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This is sweet. I like the descriptions of the warmth and cold; you're good at describing things.

.Brittany.

December 16th 2016 08:24 PM

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I really enjoyed reading this one! However, I now want a cup of tea..

DeletedAccount69

December 17th 2016 03:25 AM

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I agree that this was sweet but also kind of sad! Thank you for sharing.

NeuroBeautiful

December 27th 2016 04:31 PM

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Thank you all of you

DeletedAccount16

January 2nd 2017 05:18 AM

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I got the same feeling that this was both really sweet and kind of sad. The last stanza was my favorite. Write more! :hehe:

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