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what am i - February 10th 2017, 08:38 PM
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it's a flat tyre deflating,
it's hope slowly fading,
it's my happiness dying,
the pain i hold in,
the secrets i keep,
you'll see me smiling,
inside im silently screaming,
it's a volcano waiting to errupt,
it's my dreams slowly sinking,
i'm depression
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Re: what am i - February 10th 2017, 08:39 PM
I love this Lydia <3 I know you've been going through a lot lately and I wish there was a way I can help you. Stay strong <3


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Re: what am i - February 12th 2017, 12:01 AM
I like the comparisons in this!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: what am i - February 13th 2017, 10:04 PM
I agree with Dez; I like the mention of the tire and the volcano as well as the ending! Nicely done.

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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Re: what am i - February 25th 2017, 07:41 PM
I really liked this. i can relate so much.
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Re: what am i - February 25th 2017, 09:18 PM
I love this, especially the comparisons. Stay strong. <3

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Re: what am i - February 27th 2017, 04:49 PM
I really liked this. Thank you for sharing!
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Re: what am i - March 12th 2017, 03:08 PM
I like how you use multiple metaphors for this and the last two lines are great too!
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Re: what am i - March 14th 2017, 12:35 AM
As always, I really like what you write. It's genuine and comes straight from your heart, soul, and mind. You are such a strong young lady, keep going. <3

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