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Life or movie free verse poem - July 25th 2017, 05:18 AM

Life or Movie

Life in a movie is simple.
True, there is horror
fear, conflict, and countless death,
In a movie.
But movies always have happy endings.

Real life is hard.
There is still horror,
Fear, conflict, and countless death
In our world today.
But when is our story going to end?

And when it does end,
How will it end?


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Re: Life or movie free verse poem - July 25th 2017, 10:22 PM

I really liked this! It was really well structured, with the first part being about a movie and the second about real life, so the comparison was really easy to see. I particularly enjoyed the symmetry between the two halves, because both followed the same pattern and had elements of repetition which really put the message across. Write as much as you like and post as much as you like! I'd love to read a bit more.


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Re: Life or movie free verse poem - July 26th 2017, 01:38 AM

I really liked this! Thank you for sharing.


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Re: Life or movie free verse poem - July 26th 2017, 01:01 PM

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Re: Life or movie free verse poem - July 26th 2017, 03:33 PM

This is awesome! The questions really make you think.


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