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Question Dear Daddy - August 24th 2017, 12:27 AM

Dear Daddy
Do I ever cross your mind?
Like a helpless thought, a wonder why?
I am your child, your baby girl.
Or am I really? I'm not quite sure.
Dear Daddy
Do you remember the day I was born?
A hot July day, in the middle of the month,
Or to forget it have you sworn?
Have you engraved it into your mind?
Or written it in your calendar as if to be kind.
Dear Daddy
What is your real family like ?
Do you tuck your son and daughter alike into to bed every night?
Your son he is not much younger than me,
Two months younger isn't he?
Dear Daddy
Please, why can't you see, how much you are hurting me.
I long to hear a single word, from you.
Dear Daddy
A single word, one phone call
An email, or a visit
Is all it takes to make your daughters world.
But, Dear Daddy, you will not even make me a part of yours.


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Re: Dear Daddy - August 24th 2017, 01:35 AM

There is a lot of emotion here and the repetition makes it powerful. Thank you for sharing this.


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Re: Dear Daddy - August 24th 2017, 01:43 AM

I really like the questions you asked.


   
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Re: Dear Daddy - August 25th 2017, 06:04 AM

I could feel the emotion you were trying to convey. Thank you for sharing.


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Re: Dear Daddy - August 27th 2017, 06:18 PM

I liked this. Thank you, hugs.
   
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