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WhisperingSilence September 29th 2017 09:37 PM

poem
 
We're sitting in the cubicles,
Alone with a shiny metal friend,
It's the only thing we can truely depend,
We're in the corridors breaking down,
No one seems to understand,
Education isn't right for all,
So we're often looking the fool,
We're screaming out for help,
Somone to notice,
to see, to hear,
We're lost,
We're empty,
We're sitting in the cubicles,
Four in a row,
We're sitting in the corridors,
Tears rolling down our faces,
We aint sure if we are going places
Maybe we're just going to waste it?
Where were you when I needed you?
Off your face in the bottom of a bottle,
We're in the cubicles hurting,
We're in the corridors crying,
But no one ever asks why.

Ennui. September 30th 2017 01:54 AM

Re: poem
 
The emotion in this one is amazing!

DeletedAccount69 October 2nd 2017 12:12 AM

Re: poem
 
I agree, I thought the emotions in this one were done well.

DeletedAccount29 October 3rd 2017 08:59 PM

Re: poem
 
I loved this, it really conveyed the helpless emotions in the narrative.

.Brittany. October 7th 2017 12:08 AM

Re: poem
 
You've always been a talented writer. Keep it up!


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