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Cigarettes - November 10th 2018, 11:52 AM

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Thoughts and memories swirl together
In puffs of air and clouds of smoke;
The shadows may blind me
From what I already know,
But the rain can't wash away
The stench that lingers on your clothes
Or the lies that always follow
In the ashes, as the light dies out.


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Re: Cigarettes - November 10th 2018, 02:23 PM

I really liked this, especially the first couple of lines! Thanks for sharing


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Re: Cigarettes - November 10th 2018, 03:15 PM

This was really good! I like the first few lines. Thank you for sharing!


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Re: Cigarettes - November 10th 2018, 04:30 PM

This was really good! I especially liked the first two lines, great imagery!
   
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Re: Cigarettes - November 11th 2018, 02:28 AM

I agree with liking the first few lines!


   
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Re: Cigarettes - November 13th 2018, 11:53 AM

Thanks everyone!


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Re: Cigarettes - November 14th 2018, 04:50 PM

I like how you wrote something short but full of description and imagery. It's not easy to do that. I also really liked this.


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Re: Cigarettes - November 14th 2018, 07:47 PM

Great job.

I know this feeling very well although I keep picking them up to ease the stress and relax me.
   
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Re: Cigarettes - November 14th 2018, 10:10 PM

Thank you so much


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Re: Cigarettes - November 17th 2018, 12:27 AM

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Thoughts and memories swirl together
In puffs of air and clouds of smoke;
The shadows may blind me
From what I already know,
But the rain can't wash away
The stench that lingers on your clothes
Or the lies that always follow
In the ashes, as the light dies out.
You have talent. I love to write as well, but I don't particularly write poetry or lyrics. I just write thoughts that come into my head and I put them down on paper. This is really good stuff.
   
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Re: Cigarettes - November 17th 2018, 01:19 AM

Thank you!


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Re: Cigarettes - November 24th 2018, 05:22 PM

You're very talented! Keep up the good work



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Re: Cigarettes - November 25th 2018, 02:58 AM

Thanks!


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