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Hiding in the Dark April 13th 2021 04:56 AM

Lonely
 
Surrounded by people
Yet I feel so alone
I love my friends
But they don’t understand

I don’t want to bury them with my burdens
Or inconvenience them with my thoughts
They would be scared by my demons
They all cannot understand the depth of my pain

So I keep my feelings inside me
Allowing them to fester
When I’m alone, I set them free
I can’t control them any longer

Dawn. April 13th 2021 06:52 AM

Re: Lonely
 
This is a really nice piece. :)

Celyn April 13th 2021 11:39 AM

Re: Lonely
 
This was really good and very relatable too! I also notice that this is your first post on TeenHelp and wanted to not only welcome you to our community but to let you know that I hope you are able to get support here too :hug:

Hiding in the Dark April 13th 2021 12:59 PM

Re: Lonely
 
Thank you both! I've posted as a guest and so I've already experienced the warm community here, I'm glad I can be a part of it.

DeletedAccount59 April 13th 2021 01:24 PM

Re: Lonely
 
Welcome to the site! Hope you're finding you way around here well enough. :)

You shared a very well-written piece and something that a lot of us can relate to.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to reach out.

Everglow. April 13th 2021 04:22 PM

Re: Lonely
 
I really like this poem. It's short and effective and really shows your emotions well. My favourite part was the last couple of lines as I found them really relatable. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your writing if you'd like to share any. :)

Arabesque- golfing girl. April 13th 2021 07:09 PM

Re: Lonely
 
This was lovely:) Thank you so much for sharing this with us, also welcome:) hope you are doing well :hug:

Ennui. April 15th 2021 12:46 AM

Re: Lonely
 
I definitely can relate to this!


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