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Soda_Voxel

June 12th 2021 10:17 PM

love & hate

love & hate

I like the way you know me.
Remembering my jokes,
my favourite things,
an obscure fact I told you once.
I like the way you make me happy,
engaging with my interests,
Showing me things I love.
I like the way you make me imagine things,
and give me hope for a better life.
But I resent the way it's all platonic,
no further meaning,
all a joke.
I hate the way you say, "just kidding".
You don't love me.
I don't love that.

Ennui.

June 12th 2021 10:33 PM

Re: love & hate

I like how you changed colors in different parts!

Arabesque- golfing girl.

June 13th 2021 02:11 PM

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This was lovely and I enjoyed reading it too. I liked how you ended this. :hug:

Everglow.

June 21st 2021 12:44 PM

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I really like that the different colours represented the stages of emotions in this poem. It's really well written! :)

Dawn.

June 22nd 2021 05:48 AM

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I really like this piece. :)

Celyn

June 25th 2021 04:57 PM

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This was really good and I could really feel the change in emotions in this piece. Thank you for sharing!

Tennant

November 8th 2021 12:19 AM

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I liked it very much

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