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lonely16

December 14th 2021 01:01 AM

Trapped

Trapped (Inspired by Astro04)

I’m trapped on this earth
Trapped by its dwellers
Trapped by Their feelings
Caged in
And stuck
No room to breathe
Can’t be Me
Stuck
Stuck
Stuck
I’m trapped by my emotions
Trapped by my thoughts
Trapped by My feelings
Caged in
And stuck
Weighing me down
Can’t be Me
Stuck
Stuck
Stuck
Only one way
To break free

Dawn.

December 14th 2021 09:05 AM

Re: Trapped

I really like this piece.

Everglow.

December 14th 2021 07:49 PM

Re: Trapped

I really like this one too. It's very simple, but I like that it goes around in a loop which gives the feeling of being trapped. Thank you for sharing. :)

Ennui.

December 14th 2021 09:56 PM

Re: Trapped

I like the repetition of the word stuck!

Arabesque- golfing girl.

December 15th 2021 10:15 AM

Re: Trapped

This was really good and thank you so much for sharing this with us.

DeletedAccount81

December 15th 2021 12:38 PM

Re: Trapped

This was really well written and I love the emphasis on being stuck.

I hope you continue to share more of your work with us. :hug:

Celyn

March 21st 2022 03:54 PM

Re: Trapped

I really liked this and feel like I could relate a little, especially the 'can't be me'. Thanks for sharing!

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