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I'm Not Who You Think I Am
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Angel Of Death - January 17th 2009, 08:01 PM

Youíre the angel Iíve been hearing,
The voice inside of me,
The time continues leering,
Youíre the voice of death I see,

Pain, pressure, perseverance,
Are qualities you possess,
To feed upon my agony,
Ensure the will to live less,

The corner of my eye, your there,
Watching me act,
Making sure I donít give you away,
Your grin so big, surely fact,

You wont let me decide who to trust,
How to cope with things, unable,
Using me as entertainment,
Allowing people to believe your fable,

You always manage to hurt me,
Out the corner of my eye,
So your watching and listening,
To ensure I donít try,

To break away from you,
To go against the rules,
Because when it comes to living,
Iím such a fool,

But I know you want to kill me,
I can see it in your eyes,
Though I still stay and pray,
Because I cant tell which are lies,

You have such control of me,
More then I could believe,
So much more control,
Then I ever could perceive.


[x] Even though I'm the sacrifice,
You wont try for me, not now,
Though I'd die to know you love me,

I'm all alone,

Isn't something missing?
Isnt someone missing me [x]

Baby, i want you to be my superman.
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Re: Angel Of Death - January 18th 2009, 05:39 AM

I like your writing style,its good.
Shows a lot of emotion!
   
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Re: Angel Of Death - January 18th 2009, 08:57 PM

Lol. You must like my style alot as you say that to most of my poems. =]


[x] Even though I'm the sacrifice,
You wont try for me, not now,
Though I'd die to know you love me,

I'm all alone,

Isn't something missing?
Isnt someone missing me [x]

Baby, i want you to be my superman.
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Re: Angel Of Death - January 21st 2009, 12:42 PM

I love this poem, It's amazing, your style is really good!


My shattered heart so hollow,inside me, so much pain,my bleeding soul, crying,lost love, tearing me apart...I am cursed to the sorrow,screams inside, heart slain,without you, I am dying,farewell, queen of my heart...
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