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Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 07:45 AM

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i just want to apologise
skin i never meant to hurt you
it wasnt my plan
your already so scarred
and had healing wounds
i didnt plan to do this
i never planned for you to meet
not you and the razorblade
i didnt want yous to be near
it was never meant to happen
not again not today anyway
please accept my apologies
i didnt mean to make you bleed
im sorry your hurting again
it was never meant to be
if you just werent a part of part of me
then maybe you would be free
i hate myself so much
im sorry skin i take it out on you
you met the blade
and you cried crimson
i didnt mean to hurt you
and put you through this pain again
please accept my apologies
for im truly sorry
your hurting again
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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 08:48 AM

you met the blade
and you cried crimson

two amazing lines, I like the poem alot, it has a stop and go feel, different, but well written, maybe organize it into stanzas? maybe the iseads will come out even cleaner.

Overall i got the idea of the poem as well as the emotion in it clearly, GREAT JOB!!!


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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 08:53 AM

what are stanzas?
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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 01:48 PM

wow its really good.
   
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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 01:50 PM

Amazing very emotional.


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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 02:38 PM

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what are stanzas?
Stanzas are like verses, the other person meant split your poem into sections. It was very good by the way


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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 02:43 PM

Made me cry, Brooke. Amazing poem.


   
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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 03:57 PM

That seriously wonderful. [:
   
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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 04:06 PM

I got the feeling that it wasn't only your skin you were apologising too, or maybe i'm looking too much into it.

It's really good. I love it. xx


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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 04:19 PM

i honestly couldnt say vision when i wrote that vision i was in a trance
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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 04:27 PM

Hey!
This was really good.
It was seriously wonderful! (:


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Re: Apologies to my skin - August 28th 2009, 07:01 PM

amazing Brooke
the words have so much meaning its just brilliant, absolutly loved it.
stay strong
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