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F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 4th 2010, 01:44 PM

This is a poem i wrote for my ex. I miss her and the friendship/bond we had.


F - Forgive me for the pain i caused, i never ment to hurt,
R - Reunite - lets not throw away all our hard work
I - If people can't accept your imperfections, that's their fault, so i was told
E - everyone makes mistakes, i remind myself of them - not discard them in a vault
N - 'n so as the burning ember of our love fades away and turns to grey i'd like to say;
D - Don't destroy our history, there's good memories in the past,
S - Sorry for the pain i caused, i'll be waiting 'til you come back



I'll leave feedback for you, just let me know!
   
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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 4th 2010, 05:40 PM

That's very nice. Those words are so true. I hope you're doing okay, I know how tough break-ups are. Please let me know if you ever want to talk about it.


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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 4th 2010, 10:30 PM

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That's very nice. Those words are so true. I hope you're doing okay, I know how tough break-ups are. Please let me know if you ever want to talk about it.
thanks alot hopefaithlove, i appreciate it. it's been such a difficult breakup.. im glad you think the words are true. i might take you up on that offer.
   
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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 5th 2010, 12:41 AM

Oh my gosh. Brought up so many memories. I lost a close friend after something traumatic that happened to me that she couldn't handle. My feelings are illustrated exactly in this poem. Thank you for sharing.



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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 5th 2010, 01:22 AM

Very emotional poem, I liked it.
   
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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 5th 2010, 01:03 PM

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Oh my gosh. Brought up so many memories. I lost a close friend after something traumatic that happened to me that she couldn't handle. My feelings are illustrated exactly in this poem. Thank you for sharing.
I'm sorry to hear that, but thanks for the comments, i'm glad you could relate to it

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Very emotional poem, I liked it.
thanks Ryan
   
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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 5th 2010, 06:29 PM

Very emotional and heartfelt. I like the way you set it up to spell friends like that. Sorry about the break up though


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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 5th 2010, 08:57 PM

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Very emotional and heartfelt. I like the way you set it up to spell friends like that. Sorry about the break up though
thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it. take care
   
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Re: F.R.I.E.N.D.S - pls leave feedback - January 5th 2010, 09:10 PM

I liked it a lot. You are a good writer! and I am sorry to hear about what the poem is based off of. Hang in there.


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