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I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 17th 2010, 08:13 PM

Girl to guy
That's normal
Girl to girl
Informal
Guy to guy
Hormonal
What am I?
Abnormal.

Who are you?
Typical
Who am I?
Dispicable
Are you gay?
Unthinkable
Where does that leave me?
Alone and sinkable


Hey, I'm Jonah. I like Degrassi, writing, and hanging out with friends. I'm sixteen years old and I am FTM transgender, although these days I identify more as just plain male.
I just wrote up a huge thing about the significance of my username, just to find out it was too long. So if you're curious about it, feel free to ask me.
I used to go on here a lot, but lately I don't go on very much at all. Either way, you should still leave me a message some time, I'm very friendly
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 18th 2010, 09:04 PM

I actually really like this and I'm not usually one for poems like that... it's cute and it's witty (:
Kind of sad message but I just love the rhymes you've come up with d: x
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 18th 2010, 10:04 PM

I changed the last line. Now it goes

Girl to guy
That's normal
Girl to girl
Informal
Guy to guy
Hormonal
What am I?
Abnormal.

Who are you?
Typical
Who am I?
Despicable
Are you gay?
Unthinkable
And my pride?
Unsinkable


Hey, I'm Jonah. I like Degrassi, writing, and hanging out with friends. I'm sixteen years old and I am FTM transgender, although these days I identify more as just plain male.
I just wrote up a huge thing about the significance of my username, just to find out it was too long. So if you're curious about it, feel free to ask me.
I used to go on here a lot, but lately I don't go on very much at all. Either way, you should still leave me a message some time, I'm very friendly
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 18th 2010, 11:19 PM

AMAZING LIZA!!!
You're such a great writer.
I can really feel the emotion and pride.
Keep up the great work!



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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 19th 2010, 12:56 AM

Good job Liza.
I likess.




   
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 19th 2010, 07:20 AM

I like it. It's short, to the point, and very emotional. Keep it up. = ]


And when I wake, I'm right here by your side,
to feel your heart beat in and out of time.

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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 19th 2010, 05:28 PM

Very nicely done.


I saw you somewhere, listening to that familiar song, dancing that same old dance, living life as the your hair pranced in the moonlight.
   
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 19th 2010, 07:51 PM

I like it Liza


And I will take you in my arms, and hold you right where you belong.
Til the day my life is through, this I promise you.121109
   
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 22nd 2010, 01:45 AM

good
it's simple but meaningful
   
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 22nd 2010, 04:09 AM

I really like it It's short and to the point. Good job
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 22nd 2010, 06:14 AM

Liked it a lot. Keep it up!!


There could never be amore beautiful you
Don't buy the lies, disguisesandhoops they make you jump through
You were made tofill a purposethat only you could do
So there could never be amore beautiful you
-Johnny Diaz


Everyday
is so wonderful
And suddenly it's hard to breathe
Now and then I get insecure
From all the pain, I feel so ashamed

I am beautiful no matter what they say
Words can't bring me down
I am beautiful in every single way
Yes, words can't bring me down, oh no
So don't you bring me down today

To all your friends you're delirious
So consumed in all your doom
Tryin' hard to fill the emptiness, the piece is gone
Left the puzzle undone, ain't that the way it is?

'Cause you are beautiful no matter what they say
Words can't bring you down, oh no
You are beautiful in every single way
Yes, words can't bring you down, oh no
So don't you bring me down today
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 23rd 2010, 05:19 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Q2Q2 View Post
I changed the last line. Now it goes

Girl to guy
That's normal
Girl to girl
Informal
Guy to guy
Hormonal
What am I?
Abnormal.

Who are you?
Typical
Who am I?
Despicable
Are you gay?
Unthinkable
And my pride?
Unsinkable
I love the edit that you made to the last couple lines! The poem flows much better this way, and I prefer it rather than the original one.
You did a great job getting the message across; homosexuality might not be accepted, but your pride is still 'unsinkable.'
This is full of strength and determination to rise above the viewpoints and the opinions of others.
A very confident and smart poem! Great job.


   
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 23rd 2010, 07:25 PM

Aw i like this




   
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Re: I Hate Rhyming Poems :P - March 24th 2010, 08:52 PM

I love it <3!
   
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