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Empty Room Empty Soul - April 15th 2010, 06:03 AM

The walls are bare
As are the walls of my soul

The room is empty except for a few small things
As is my soul except for the little bit of something I have left

The room is dark and desolent
As is my soul craving light

A light is turned on in the room
My soul remains dark.

The room is filled with light
But my soul feels dead

The room is destroyed
But still my soul goes on
On to another room in this house
of infinite rooms where my mind calls
home



Things do get better in time.
I used to believe that things would never get better.
But after many long years things are looking up!
So don't ever give up!
Stay strong and move on!
Things WILL get better!

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Re: Empty Room Empty Soul - April 15th 2010, 01:41 PM

I like your work, keep it up


And I will take you in my arms, and hold you right where you belong.
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Re: Empty Room Empty Soul - April 16th 2010, 04:35 AM

Thanks alot!



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Re: Empty Room Empty Soul - April 16th 2010, 09:54 AM

I don't quite know why, but I really liked that. It was really good.


my love i'm going to the ocean,
let it swallow me whole.

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Re: Empty Room Empty Soul - April 18th 2010, 04:49 AM

haha nice! Thanks Alot!



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Re: Empty Room Empty Soul - April 21st 2010, 04:03 AM

I love this [:




   
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