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Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 1st 2010, 03:36 PM

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Emptiness cuts deeper than any blade
Infects my blood, my soul
A disease that makes me suffer
The noise builds to an unbearable crescendo
Echoes of my thoughts twist inside me
I stare at my arm, the scars criss-crossed
They are the angels who broke their wings
They’ll stay here forever, one for each memory
Patterns drawn on my skin for safekeeping
A slight smile across my face
When I see the red line appear
All thoughts drain from my mind
A pinprick of light in a black oblivion
Now happiness cuts deeper than any blade




   
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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 1st 2010, 05:52 PM

Looks good.
   
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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 2nd 2010, 01:03 AM

i really like that alot Charlotte. reminds me of how i felt all the time- and still sometimes do. great job!


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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 2nd 2010, 01:00 PM

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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 2nd 2010, 06:57 PM

This is very amazing and heart-felt.
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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 2nd 2010, 07:30 PM

Your piece of writing is very passionate, I like it


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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 2nd 2010, 10:16 PM

it means alot to have people say things like that xxx




   
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Thumbs up Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 8th 2010, 03:58 AM

This is such an amazing piece of literature. I felt like this for years. You know what the best part is? Coming back to this in ten years and saying to yourself,"Wow, I really did it. I made it through." I know it seems hopeless. And I won't lie, sometimes it really, truly is. But you have to believe so strongly in yourself that anything can happen. Hell, we can make pigs fly if we put our minds to it. I know you probably don't want to stop. You may say it out loud but truly, deep down, you find so much comfort in that small piece of metal that you wouldn't give it up if someone offered you the world. It's scary. It really is. I know I'm young but I have been down that road. I really have. Everyone here at TH is here to support you. You can truly accomplish anything if you want it more than anything in the world.

Most importantly, keep writing. You are amazingly talented. <3

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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 8th 2010, 06:19 PM

thankyou so much
It's nice to see someone thats been through it... it makes me feel optimistic about things xxx




   
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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 8th 2010, 10:33 PM

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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 9th 2010, 07:21 PM

why thankyou! (: xx




   
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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 9th 2010, 08:13 PM

See, you are pretty dang good at writing!
   
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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 9th 2010, 08:30 PM

Wow, that's amazing!! I totally can relate to this. I think this is a beautiful piece of writing and I love it.!!
   
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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 10th 2010, 01:17 AM

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Re: Cuts deeper than any blade. - July 10th 2010, 10:34 AM

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ahahaaa :') thankyou! I'd say writing is a passion of mine

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Wow, that's amazing!! I totally can relate to this. I think this is a beautiful piece of writing and I love it.!!
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