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I hate when i write things that suck.. - August 6th 2010, 01:25 AM

.. But I'm meeting my all time hero in 10 hours so NOTHING can get me down
in roughly 10 hours I will be meeting McFly. Which means I will be meeting TOM FLETCHER AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
This means more than like life to me I've been waiting for this for 7 years


Drag me out of my mind
Then wake me up to find
That I no longer care
And I'm not really there
March me out to the drum
What have we become
When we tear all our hearts apart

Here's one for thought
What if I never went
Would your life then distort
Would you start to resent

Don't pretend to love me
Then look in my eyes
Say you're thinking of me
And trap me with your lies

What was it they said
We hope you drop dead
Well for taking the chances
All the hate fuelling glances
You can consider it done
So just pass me your gun
Watch me tearing my heart apart

Here's one for thought
What if I never went
Would your life then distort
Would you start to resent

Why start to fear
What's always here
What you can't avoid
Don't let them win
Don't let them in
To see what they destroyed


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ORIGINAL MCFLY FAN ®


"Another year over, and we're still together.
It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever
I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes
'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!"

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Re: I hate when i write things that suck.. - August 6th 2010, 06:24 PM

I like that poem, Don't tell yourself it sucks!!! Better than I can do... I hope you had fun meeting McFly!



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So sing for the river and sing for the stars.
Sing for the friends you made, wherever they are.
Sing to bring you back again or to take you away.
Sing a song for me my friend.
Sing for today.
I know I sound like every other member, but really, PM me!!! I would love to have someone to talk to!
   
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Re: I hate when i write things that suck.. - August 6th 2010, 08:18 PM

Thank you very much


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"Another year over, and we're still together.
It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever
I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes
'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!"
   
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Re: I hate when i write things that suck.. - August 6th 2010, 10:47 PM

I love this Amelia! Your work is outstanding. Thank you for sharing.




   
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Re: I hate when i write things that suck.. - August 7th 2010, 04:12 PM

Thank you Angelina


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"Another year over, and we're still together.
It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever
I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes
'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!"
   
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Re: I hate when i write things that suck.. - August 9th 2010, 02:10 AM

thats really good Amelia! great job!!


username used to be snowstorm

promises mean everything,
but once they're broken,
sorry means nothing.

Ill be fine, I swear..... Im just Gone Beyond Repair
-Mayday Parade
Repose en Paix, Mrs. Radoye♥ ~April 24, 2012~
   
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Re: I hate when i write things that suck.. - August 9th 2010, 01:17 PM

Thanks Jordan


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"Another year over, and we're still together.
It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever
I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes
'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!"
   
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