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Unhappy Another day, another fight. - August 14th 2010, 04:29 AM

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hey guys, this might be very triggering for some people. and sorry about any speeling errors. but any feed back would be great. please

Another day, another fight. warm crimson liquid runs down my face, forming a puddle on the white carpet.
"ged up" he yells his voice laced with alcohol, he grabbs a hand full of hair yanking me up to my feet. i grap for the door to turn and run, im to slow.
"you lil bitch! you not getting away from me, i got more i want from you." he slaps me to the floor.
"god please, please dont", i begg blood and tears running down my face, he undoes his belt with one hand ripping my top off with the other. i try crawl away, a strinning sensation runs down my back, to much to handle, my world goes fuzzy then the darkness comes, wrapping me in its arms away from harm.

i wake up numb, the car sounds in the garage and drives off. thankgod he's gone. i slowly sit up, the sheets falling off me, exlosing my naked breasts, deep red cuts and bruises covered then. i pull the sheets around myself and walk over to the mirror, a strange girl stands there before me, i drop the sheet to expose the damage caused this time. my body painted with bruises and cuts, the worst of them a deep gash running from my hip to knee. i turn away and pick up the sheet, ashamed to look anymore. how could i let him do this to me agian.
i walk to the kitchen glass everywhere.
"no! mum! oh god mum!" i run over to her body lying face down in a pool of blood. i turn her over, her emerald eyes glazed.
"mum!!"i sob tars streaming down my face, i pressed my lips to hers, cold and stiff.
"i love you mummy. i'll get him for this" i close her eyes weeping, i grab the phone and call 111.
"please help my mums dead" i scream into the phone, hysterics forming. it seemed like forever waiting for the sound of the sirens. i grab the gun off the table facing the door, he walks in. all the hate i have for him erupts.
"you killed her, you sick mother fucker, you killed her!" i point the gun at him, and squese the trigger, once, twice,third time to make sure.
i watch him as he drops to the floor, police filling in after him. Pointing guns at me, i raise the gun to my head.
"dont do it" a cop yells. i look down to my mother, the most beautiful woman in the world.
"i'll see you soon mum" i close my eyes tears rolling down my face.
And then there was a shot


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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 14th 2010, 05:02 AM

Very intense and interesting. I liked it.


   
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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 14th 2010, 05:13 AM

Woah...that's extreme! I like it.


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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 14th 2010, 06:22 AM

thanks i guess, i got bits of others in my room, but idk if i could put them on here or not?


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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 14th 2010, 07:25 AM

Why wouldn't you be able to put them on here?


   
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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 14th 2010, 07:35 AM

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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 14th 2010, 04:59 PM

I would love to read some of your other work too.
If you feel like some users might be sensitive to it though, you could always label the thread as triggering, like you did with this one.
So there's no reason why you wouldn't be able to post any of your other work, if you want.


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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 15th 2010, 02:16 AM

i read what i had written on my other worl last year and it needs some serious work lol, i was writting it in the middle of the night so yea, its taking me a while to re write it :d but i will try find my stuff


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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 16th 2010, 12:18 AM

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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 18th 2010, 08:55 AM

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Re: Another day, another fight. - August 18th 2010, 09:11 AM

It's incredibly intense, deep and at the same time, very touching - right at the end.
It's something all right! In a good way, lol.
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