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I'm A Pyschotic Neurotic.
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About Me - February 22nd 2009, 03:12 PM

I wonder what the fuck to do
The doctors say its up to you
The meds I'm on do help a bit
But deep inside I still feel shit

On my tongue pills does go
Because theyre many, I cant swallow
So I spit them onto the floor
& tell the docs, I want no more

Living in my own flat
With my little pussy cat
24 hour care with me
When can I just be free

I grab a knife, I want to cut
All emotions are just shut
Quickly slash across my arm
Blood seeps through, I mean no harm














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Re: About Me - February 22nd 2009, 09:05 PM

good use of imagery! the rhyming takes away from it a bit, it makes your poem sound cute and fluffy instead of sad and disturbing...i'd suggest a different style.

but you've got talent so keep writing
   
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