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Perfect Little Girl - November 13th 2010, 03:48 AM

You notice something,
Something not right.
The bloodstains, the cuts, or maybe the knife.

But you say nothing,
I’m the perfect little girl.
Perfect, perfect, perfect in this freaking perfect world.

You see right through my laughs,
You look right at my tears.
And you know that I have been suffering for so many years.

You keep it to yourself,
Not wanting to ruin my lie.
But when they do find out, what is your alibi?

You, my dear older sister,
You promised to always protect me.
Then why is our relationship as rocky as the sea?

How did you see my cuts,
And not know I was dieing inside?
By the time I covered them up, it was far too late to hide.

I smiled at your questioning look,
And I turned my back on you.
And I know that you saw many more then just a few.

The cuts cover my legs now sister,
And my stomach, and very soon my arms.
But everything you did after it, showed you had no alarm.

So why, dear sister,
Do you believe my lies?
You saw proof yourself that I’m dieing inside!

But I'll still be the perfect little girl,
That you've always known.
And someday to the world, the flawed me will be shown.


hear us sing!



you will draw from the silence
the things you ask
strength, hope, and the courage to grow. ♥

   
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Re: Perfect Little Girl - November 13th 2010, 05:36 PM

That's really good... I can definitely relate. I hope you're okay.
Stay strong. <3


All your life, you are told the things you cannot do. All your life, they will say you're not good, strong or talented enough; they will say you're the wrong height weight, or the wrong type to be this or acheive this. They will tell you no a thousand times until all the no's become meaningless. All your life they will tell you no quite firmly, and very quickly. And all your life, you will tell them yes. <3
   
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Re: Perfect Little Girl - November 13th 2010, 10:26 PM

This is a very powerful poem. I hope you're OK.


Maybe it's not my weekend but it's gonna be my year.

It's perfectly fine to be a happy individual.

Take off at the speed of sound...
   
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Cheyenne is phresh ^.^

Jeez, get a life!
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Re: Perfect Little Girl - November 14th 2010, 01:36 AM

This was so wonderful!
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Re: Perfect Little Girl - November 14th 2010, 10:33 PM

This is lovely.
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Re: Perfect Little Girl - November 15th 2010, 01:42 PM

I really like this, good work, keep it up


And I will take you in my arms, and hold you right where you belong.
Til the day my life is through, this I promise you.121109
   
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